hi...
just wrote a poem for my eng poetry thingy....
pls comment and either tag it(if its short)
or send me via email(if its long)
P.S.
this is my first poem so it kinda suck
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Voice out your thoughts, the young, suppressed,
You should not be stopped;
They have no right to gauge you by your age,
And remove the freedom that you sought.
The world reeks of lies and unease,
And she needs new blood to lead her;
And only with new ideas and innovation can she be contempt,
And pull herslef from the chaos she is in, this matter should not be slurred.
So, man, turn and grieve over your actions, coward,
For you have caused Mother Earth to bleed;
It’s time to end this salvation, and move forward
It is time for new blood to take over, to rise.